Tuesday, August 18, 2020

My favourite time of the day

We were learning about writing great, descriptive recounts.  

I found it easy to publish my recount to a slide. 

I found it challenging to give my moment the right mood.

Next time I will publish to a slide as soon as I'm finished writing in the doc.

2 comments:

  1. kia ora isobel
    its me manaia
    i really like you stems and they are very quility and cool
    i really like you background because it matches your topic and title
    next time i think you might need to add a bit more detail

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    1. Thank you for the feedback Manaia!

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