We were learning about recapping about what a recount is, then with our writing buddy we were to make a blog post about what we thought are the most important things to have or do to make a recount a recount.
I found it easy to write the top ten things about recounts once I had started, (the starting part was hard.) This session was not the easiest so I don't have that much on the I found it easy to... paragraph.
I found it hard to think of the top ten things that are most important to include in a recount in the first sesion, my head must have still been in weekend mode! But fortunately in the next sesion I managed to get my head around it. The only other thing that I found hard was working with Manaia.
Next time I will sit beside Manaia (my writing buddy) and try to corporate more thoroughly with her. Another thing I will need to do next time I am with my writing buddy is to not give up on working with her so soon, even if she is not doing the same thing as I am. I will just have to show her the top ten things I have made.
Me and my writing buddy Manaia think that these are the top ten most important things to have or do to make a recount a recount:
#1. It has to be a recap of a recent event.
#2. It has to be in past tense.
#3. It has to have paragraphs.
#4. Sizzling start and clever conclusion
#5. Punctuation.
#6. Descriptive language.
#7. Language features.
#8. Senses (smell, see, feel, hear and taste.)
#9. Nouns/Adverbs.
# 10. Rich words.
My goal for this term is to be recognised as a leader for being the perfect Awapuni kid, eg: Wonderful manners, Correct uniform, A bucket filler and a lid fitter.
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