We were learning about writing a informative recount about our school triathlon. We had to use descriptive, rich words to paint a picture in the reader's mind. Mrs Bavas exact words that she had written on the Team Toroa were: I want you to include powerful adjectives, verbs, adverbs and emotive words about the School Triathlon at Churchill Park. The success criteria for this lesson was to include a range of descriptive words, adverbs, verbs and use the correct tense.
I found it easy to use heaps of emotive words in my writing as there was a lot of emotion included in the school triathlon for me. Another thing that was easy for me was publishing, all I had to do was copy and paste my draft writing into a google slide, make it look interesting then post it to my blog.
I found it challenging to to finish my writing in the time we were given, so I only ended up publishing and blogging about my writing in this finishing up session. The other challenging thing was to find some amazing rich words to replace the boring ones. I did it eventually but it was still hard.
Next time I will do some of the writing at home since I have my own chromebook. If I do that then I might be able to finish the writing and post it to my blog sooner.
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