We were learning about Tsunamis in our reading this week, using our multi-model reading slides me and my reading group, Waikanae have over three online books and one National Geographic video. This week our main text was called the Hungry Wave.
I found it easy to choose what would go in my survival kit, such as water, canned food, a radio and a first aid kit. Basically all the essentials, The other thing I found easy was to polyline all the things in my poster because all the things were pretty basic, or I just had to duplicate it until there was enough.
I found it challenging to use just the right amount of words so it was not a whole descriptive story, but not so little that it was only a few words and didn't tell you anything at all. I ended up with quite a few thought bubbles but in each one there was around about the right amount of words.
Next time I will try to add more detail to my bag so it looks like it could hold more and is even more impressive compared to how it is now. Another thing I could work on is having more pockets showing on the bag so all of the necessities that I polylined aren't all sticking out the top.
Hi Isobel I really like the way you were saying what you could feat in you bag to survive.And I really like how you made your bag big so we can see what you stored and saying it.I also like the way you put clouds at the back of your writing so we can see your words and I also like the way you have quality stems and rich language in you stems and having long words.Next time you could have more details to your backpack and what you were saying in reading time you could have another pocket for your water so I does not look squashed but I don't know if your suppose to do that.But everything else is great and amazing and keep up with the great work.By Stephanie.
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