The learning intention of this writing session was to write a recount about the best or worst day of our holiday. It has to be about one moment in time, using rich descriptive language to paints a picture in the reader's mind. I think I achieved that, don't you? I chose to write about my first Brazilian Ju Jitsu session in quite a while, and since we went to the library afterwards it was definitely the best day of my holidays.
It was hard to figure out what I found challenging but here it is: I found it challenging to put in as many language features as I possibly could. I ended up only being able to put in one simile some dialogue. I also put in one example of hyperbole.
I found writing three paragraphs on my BJJ class to be the easiest part of this writing session. I also found it easy to use past tense. Our BJJ gym is near where the farmers market happens. Just go to said farmers market then head towards the back wall. That is where Te Kura Awhio is.
To improve my writing next time I will add more language features, for an example I could add in a metaphor, some onomatopoeia or maybe a piece of personification. How else do you think I could improve my writing skills?
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