Creek Tranquility

 For a whole week now everybody in Miss Morrow - Rankin's writing group have been focusing on learning personification. Including this piece unless you were away we should have written four stories with personification in each paragraph. We also needed to add four other language features, eg: similes, metaphors, nouns, dialogue and onomatopoeia.

For me the most difficult or challenging part on this activity was choosing what I was going to write about. We had to write about our favorite place to be. I ended up choosing the creek we have on our property because I remembered how peaceful and tranquil I felt when I was there. The creek on the title page doesn't look like the creek in my story but we saw something like that on the way to the creek / lake. 

I found it rather easy to describe how I felt and what the area looked like. The lake I was writing about is actually the end of a long creek that wound through the bush on our property. Other then that there is practically nothing in particular that I found easy, but nothing was extremely hard either. 

To improve I feel like I could have described the bush part quite a lot more. I feel like other then that I did pretty good. But if you have picked up on something I missed on how I could make my writing better please leave a comment below telling me how I could improve.